I think that this exercise went well, although, the camera shook at points.
There is a specific shot where the actor is in the middle, to make him seem more isolated which breaks the rule of thirds. In a few shots the camera wasn't in focus. this is an accidental effect caused by the screen resolution on the camera. At one point the camera jumps from one place to another.
Mel: You have really good framing on some shots, but we need a frame for the point of view, and there are some ad cut offs. When the actor is looking up, have them looking around. More cut away to emphasise the POV. Need to establish POV. Shot/reverse shot!
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